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August 2024

Custody - Book Clubbing or Thinking Alone

  

This last anticipated monthly entry for the serialized novel Custody 

is for book club discussion or personal reflection. Feel free to email me

yeffahdrahcir@gmail.com to let me know what you or your group think. 


In case your reflections would benefit by having a full list of personalities (characters) and places handy, here is a link: https://richardhaffey.com/custody-finale#5bab7eaf-e4d9-48cd-a0ac-a89f28ccd0a4  




Topic Areas For Discussion

Seven Groupings

Personalities / Characters

Personalities / Characters

The Panels 

here suggest 

seven groupings 

of topics and 

sets of questions 

to pick or choose 

from or among

for  

book club discussion or 

contemplation alone.

Personalities / Characters

Personalities / Characters

Personalities / Characters

  

1. Was there a most significant personality (character) to whom you were attracted in the cast of Custody? Who? Why?


2. Was there a specific personality (character) in the cast of Custody who you did not especially care for? Who? Why?


3. Was there a particular relationship between, or among, personalities (characters) that you found most 

  

1. Was there a most significant personality (character) to whom you were attracted in the cast of Custody? Who? Why?


2. Was there a specific personality (character) in the cast of Custody who you did not especially care for? Who? Why?


3. Was there a particular relationship between, or among, personalities (characters) that you found most enjoyable to read about and discover? What about that relationship did you favor most? How was their developing relationship influenced by the storyline; how did their developing relationship move the storyline along? 


4. Did any of the paired personality associations in Custody shed light for you on mirrored relationships of other pairs, as foils or counterpoints? 

For example: Rosalyn & Marie vs. Beatriz & Yvonne; Miss Alex & Linda vs. April & Myles; Danny & Dominic vs. Angie Flynn & Detective Howe vs. Maura & Frances. 

Can you think of others you recall?


5. As you were reading along did you have any particular feelings about the three women in Ned Hegerman’s orbit: Executive Assistant Eleanor Quatrane, Attorney Karidja Soro, and Stenographer Gabriella Costa? 


6. Of the peripheral personalities which ones most caught your attention, or occasioned a distraction for you, in following the storyline?  

Perhaps: Judge Eoin McCarver . . . Attorneys Ned Hegerman and Godfrey Mellon . . . Charles Spada . . . Mike Riley . . . Itzel Cocom . . . Valerie McKinley . . . Dr. Françoise Oulette . . . The Flash . . . Mrs. Corredor . . . Linda’s schoolmates Deidre and Clementine (‘Red”). . . any others? 

Storyline / Plot Arcs

Personalities / Characters

Storyline / Plot Arcs

  

7. Custody featured a number of intertwined plot arcs within the fuller storyline.

Did their presentation seem clear to you? Did they cause a sense of intrigue or confusion for you? Which plot arc did you like the most? Which did you care for least? Are there any you would eliminate if you were editing the story and your publisher told y

  

7. Custody featured a number of intertwined plot arcs within the fuller storyline.

Did their presentation seem clear to you? Did they cause a sense of intrigue or confusion for you? Which plot arc did you like the most? Which did you care for least? Are there any you would eliminate if you were editing the story and your publisher told you to make the book shorter? How would their elimination impact the rest of Custody, or require changes in other plot arcs or the overall storyline?


8. Custody was set in a definite time and place—September 1992, Metro NY and NJ, with a side trip to Philadelphia—when members of the general public were less technologically aided in their daily living and very few people had cell phones. 

As you were reading, what did you think about the way the novel presented to you the movement of characters from place to place and the unfolding of the storyline from one place to another, over the progression of the hours of the same day? 


9. Are there any scenes in Custody that especially moved you? Which one(s)? Why? 

Themes / Motifs

Personalities / Characters

Storyline / Plot Arcs

  

10. Were any of these motifs or themes in the storyline of interest to you? 

Were there others? Did they advance your insight into the personalities or their relationships?

a. Books

b. Trains

c. Mirrors, Glass, Windows

d. Light and Shadows

e. Playground teeter-totters (aka see-saws)

f. Assimilations - Star Trek/Barnard/Rosalyn

g. Penalty kicks 

  

10. Were any of these motifs or themes in the storyline of interest to you? 

Were there others? Did they advance your insight into the personalities or their relationships?

a. Books

b. Trains

c. Mirrors, Glass, Windows

d. Light and Shadows

e. Playground teeter-totters (aka see-saws)

f. Assimilations - Star Trek/Barnard/Rosalyn

g. Penalty kicks in overtime and elephant mascot

h. Insecta board game 


11. Have you read any of the books/plays that affected Rosalyn Lowry’s behavior and attitudes?    

[ Rosemary’s Baby, 

The Glass Menagerie, Kramer vs Kramer, The Prime of Miss Jean Brodie, Rebecca, Grimm’s Fairy Tales, especially, “Rumpelstiltskin” ] ?

Did your familiarity with those books and their characters have any effect on how you thought about or related to Rosalyn?


12. If you are a fan of, or familiar with, kid-lit, did the books that Rosalyn picked for the students as a group, or personalized per student, offer you any further insights into Rosalyn or her motives?

More discussion topics

Childhood

Continuity and Structure in a Serialized Novel

Adult Relationships

  

  

13. Custody revolves around Linda Lowry, as she is influenced, for better or for worse, by her parents’ troubled relationship, most especially after their divorce when she is four years old, and their subsequent two-year battle over her custody. What does the story tell you explicitly about her first four years living with Myles? 

How 

  

  

13. Custody revolves around Linda Lowry, as she is influenced, for better or for worse, by her parents’ troubled relationship, most especially after their divorce when she is four years old, and their subsequent two-year battle over her custody. What does the story tell you explicitly about her first four years living with Myles? 

How would you describe their relationship? 

What does Linda seem to remember about those times together? 


14. Did you form an opinion about Rosalyn’s parenting and personality as you were reading Custody? Especially mindful of her mantra of “A woman has to be her own person.” Did Angie Flynn’s final revelations of her private discussions and time with Linda late in the story have any influence on your opinion? 


15. Happydale offered Linda her first in-school experience, after a few years of home schooling by her mother. 

What did you learn about Linda as she tried to figure out how to interact with the bully, Deirdre, and her supporters, and her own ally, Clementine, aka “Red?” 


16. Even as a six-year-old, Linda relates to adults as many “only children” who spend most of their early life more with adults than other kids. 

Who does she tend to befriend? 

Who does she tend to avoid as you witness her over the six weeks of Custody? 

What sense about people does she seem to possess?


17. As you read Custody, did you perceive any difference in the way Linda spoke in general and when she was explaining what her mother told her about the books they were reading, especially about Jinns in Arabian Nights and men in everyday life in 1992 America?


18. Do you think Linda will grow up to be like Rosalyn, with regard to her view of men and husbands? What in the book makes you think that way? 


19. What insights into how Linda is affected by living with both her parents again did you obtain as you read the Epilog?

Adult Relationships

Continuity and Structure in a Serialized Novel

Adult Relationships

  

20. How are the marriages in Custody similar and different from each other?

Think of: Rosalyn and Myles Lowry, Ned Hegerman and his wife, Itzel and Bembe  Cocom, and Dominic Corredor and his wife.


21. In Custody there are men and women who work closely together and forge close relationships of trust and friendship. 

Were you expecting any 

  

20. How are the marriages in Custody similar and different from each other?

Think of: Rosalyn and Myles Lowry, Ned Hegerman and his wife, Itzel and Bembe  Cocom, and Dominic Corredor and his wife.


21. In Custody there are men and women who work closely together and forge close relationships of trust and friendship. 

Were you expecting any of them to become romantically involved? Which ones? 

Were you disappointed when they did not? What is Custody saying about adult sexuality and relationships?

Continuity and Structure in a Serialized Novel

Continuity and Structure in a Serialized Novel

Continuity and Structure in a Serialized Novel

  

22. In response to readers’ suggestions as the months progressed, two features were added. The first was the summary of the story so far, printed in italics at the start of the monthly installment, to set up the new month’s continuation of the book.

The second was the list of characters and places in the book, published a few times in th

  

22. In response to readers’ suggestions as the months progressed, two features were added. The first was the summary of the story so far, printed in italics at the start of the monthly installment, to set up the new month’s continuation of the book.

The second was the list of characters and places in the book, published a few times in the second half of the serialization. Did you find these helpful? (If so, and you

would find it helpful again, you may wish to review the installment introductions

or even download the first pages to have a hard copy of those transition highlights).


23. Within the text of the story itself, there were occasions when characters took the time to remind their colleagues of something they had discovered together, or to bring their colleagues up-to-date on their separate activities. These conversations were also placed in the story as ‘recaps’ for the readers, necessitated by the fact that the information might have been something that was first encountered two months previously, due to the serialized format of the book. Did you find the ‘recaps’ helpful or annoying?


24. Custody employs a framing mechanism. The front end of the story and the back end of the story each occur in a custody hearing setting. Between them there were similarities and differences beyond the most obvious and visual one—one is set in a traditional courtroom and the other takes place non-traditionally in a hospital suite.Which contrasts and comparatives did you note, if any?


25. Did it add anything to the story for you that in addition to being an attorney Karidja Soro was also a specialist in conflict resolution, was from Côte D’Ivoire, and was an avid soccer/football fan? 


The Future

Continuity and Structure in a Serialized Novel

Continuity and Structure in a Serialized Novel

  

Being that you were on a journey as the book was actually being written and posted every month, would you share your views on the following matters on future creations:


26. What do you think lies in the future for the personalities you met in Custody?

Can you suggest some things for: The Lowry family . . . Dr. Oulette and April over in Fr

  

Being that you were on a journey as the book was actually being written and posted every month, would you share your views on the following matters on future creations:


26. What do you think lies in the future for the personalities you met in Custody?

Can you suggest some things for: The Lowry family . . . Dr. Oulette and April over in France . . . Karidja Soro in Côte D’Ivoire . . . Gabriella Costa and Mama Costa . . . Danny Hart . . . Dominic Corredor . . . Mike Riley . . . Angie Flynn . . . Detective Howe 


27. If you had a choice, which few personalities (characters) would you single out to be in a new 

and unrelated  book/story set a year or so later in the 1990s? What would you want them to be doing in that story? 


28. Could you see a personality from Custody becoming a recurring protagonist in an on-going series of (shorter) novels -- sequels not related to the story or themes of Custody? Which one?


29. Are there any personalities (characters) in Custody whose backstory you would like to see getting additional treatment, for example, in a collection of unconnected short stories that were prequels to their appearance in Custody, not related to the story or themes of Custody? Which one(s)?

historical events referenced in custody

Notwithstanding the inclusion of contemporary music or television or films or literary connections, there are HISTORICAL EVENTS referenced in Custody—woven there for two purposes. 

The most obvious and effortless for many readers is to place the story in a context of time, perhaps familiarly in memory. Additionally, deeper dives into the references emphasize and embed psychologically, for the reader, a storyline theme or movement in the plot of the story. 

Each link below displays one of the EVENTS and provides a portal associated with that reference you may wish to examine. For the most part, they are listed here in their order of appearance in the evolving story from October-through-June installments. The two numerical identifiers bracketed show the Installment and the Episode numbers as they appear within the installment on the website. For example, [ 1,7 ] is Installment 1 and Episode 7. 

The episode numbers are centered on the page of the posted story (in its pdf format) and run consecutively from the beginning of the entire story to the end [ 1—390; epilog is one unit ].

Deep Dive

Pick an event and go deep - use the link provided to learn more or to remind yourself of forgotten details.

Use the Links Below

Events & Links

Lauren Hutton Advertisement [ 1, 7 ] 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=shwp-zeq20E

Think about: For Myles – sweating. For Rosalyn – A part half your age. 


Côte D’Ivoire Soccer Cup of Nations Champions [ 1, 15 ]

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ivory_Coast_national_football_team


Standoff at Ruby Ridge [ 1, 20 ]

Negotiator: Bo Gritz Subject: Randy Weaver 

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ruby_Ridge_standoff


1972 Democratic Primary [ 3, 84 ]

McGovern, Chisolm, Mink, Spock, Wallace 

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/1972_Democratic_Party_presidential_primaries


1972 Student protests at Columbia and Barnard  [ throughout ]

https://www.nytimes.com/1972/04/21/archives/protest-at-columbia-brings-suspension-of-classes-today-protest-at.html


CIS (Commonwealth of Independent States) after collapse of the USSR [ 5, 131 and 7, 233 ]

https://www.britannica.com/topic/ITAR-TASS

https://www.cdc.gov/mmwr/preview/mmwrhtml/00022128.htm


Mastodon glacier pit in Cohoes NY, Harmony Hills [ 7, 231 ]

https://www.ci.cohoes.ny.us/315/Cohoes-Mastodon

      for Winston – cotton commerce after war and slavery 

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Harmony_Mills#:~:text=It%20was%20the%20largest%20cotton,2%20burned%20down%20in%201995.

      for Karidja – palm oil trade after war and slavery 

https://www.cambridge.org/core/books/abs/from-slave-trade-to-legitimate-commerce/compatibility-of-the-slave-and-palm-oil-trades-in-dahomey-18181858/D86589B7B65B738303A2182654B8CC1E


The Burghers of Calais [ 8, 292 ]

Rodin’s sculpture in Philadelphia 

https://philamuseum.org/collection/object/103361


Ault, France [ 8, 221 ]

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ault,_Somme

https://www.tracesofwar.com/sights/45347/War-Memorial-Ault.htm


Train collision on LIRR from before Rosalyn’s childhood [ 8, epilog ]

{ CAUTION: If you open a trial subscription, make sure you cancel it within a day or so }.

https://www.newspapers.com/image/602940312/?clipping_id=77586918&fcfToken=eyJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiIsInR5cCI6IkpXVCJ9.eyJmcmVlLXZpZXctaWQiOjYwMjk0MDMxMiwiaWF0IjoxNzE2Mzg4MDAyLCJleHAiOjE3MTY0NzQ0MDJ9.D-wfC_XkvIec4ZfzGdWdv56sDqBpecAzMKF8vsFSAcY


Political Strife  –  The Ivory Coast [ 8, epilog ]

https://archive.globalpolicy.org/security/issues/ivory/2004/0624analyze.htm

Magic Carpet Ride

          Theme Song of Custody 

The most audio fun I had was in creating scenes in Custody centered on Danny Hart’s friend, The Flash, and his tricked-out Chevy Suburban. Here are links for the music and the lyrics:

Listen to Steppenwolf’s 1969 rendition, recored during Rosalyn's time in college: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HPE9a_epmWw

Here’s the link for the lyrics: https://songmeanings.com/songs/view/11380/

Guest contributions

CONFLICT RESOLUTION - What is It? Where does it fit?

  

Conflict resolution is the process of ending a dispute and reaching an agreement that satisfies all parties involved. Since conflict is an essential part of being human, effective conflict resolution is not designed to avoid disagreements.

Harvard Law School  -  Cambridge, Massachusetts 

https://www.pon.harvard.edu/daily/conflict-resolution/what-is-conflict-resolution-and-how-does-it-work/

North Central College  -  Naperville, Illinois 

https://www.northcentralcollege.edu/news/2022/09/13/why-conflict-resolution-important#:~:text=Conflict%20resolution%20is%20the%20process,not%20designed%20to%20avoid%20disagreements.




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Guest Presentation 

Here's a shout out to my neighbor for her support and critical reading

of Custody all these many months, Carroll Spencer. You can get some 

nice discussion and reflections from the material she has provided. 


First there’s the very informative and entertaining blog she found online from Books on the Wall. It provides a brief history of serialized novels, including a list of authors using the format: 

from Charles Dickens to Ernest Hemingway to Truman Capote, Tom Wolfe, Stephen King, and Margaret Atwood.

See how you think Custody shapes up to the article’s section identifying  “limitations on the serialized novel as a literary form,” 

at this link: 

https://booksonthewall.com/blog/serial-novel-a-brief-history/


And then take a look at Carroll’s recommendations for discussion questions for Custody - arranged in the column to the right..

GUEST CONTRIBUTOR - CARROLL SPENCER

From the author’s neighbor and critical reader, Carroll Spencer:


Custody Book Club Questions


1)  Who is the protagonist (the main character who seeks resolution and undergoes some sort of change)? 


2) Who is the antagonist (could be a secondary character, who is pivotal in creating compelling narratives by introducing challenges and conflicts for the protagonist to overcome?


3) Did you enjoy reading this serial novel (a work of fiction that is published in sequential pieces called installments?) This format was very popular in the 1800’s and first half of the 1900’s so that more people could enjoy reading them due to the cost of books.

 

4) Did you enjoy the length of Custody? Most novels are 60,000 – 100,000 words. How many words in Custody, 1,000,000+++???


5) Did you find that all the characters were essential in Custody? 

If not, which ones would you eliminate? Which ones contributed the most to the story? 


6) Do you appreciate the research that went into writing this serial novel? The questioning techniques of Karidja (conflict resolutionist and attorney), Danny Hart (investigator) and Dominic Corredor (rail rider and NYPD detective)?


7) Did Custody make you cry, laugh, fall asleep, wait anxiously for the next installment, want to recommend it to your best friend? 


8) After perusing a few lists of Elements of a Good (Great) Novel, 

found in the link in the column to the left, here are what was listed

a. Strong Opening or Plot

b. Compelling Characters

c. Unique Writing Style

d. Sharp Dialog

e. Length

How did Custody measure up to the above elements?


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